Un-Original Sin [MTB]

[Andrew Aslan]

Hey guys, me and mate put together a video for an English Assighment. It had to have soming to do with Australia, but we had the freedom of the main topic. So i picked mountain bike riding.

This is the first video i have made so dont be to harsh! Im the one riding with White helmet and all the rest are just people that where at the local downhill track.

ps. that was my fourth time riding downhill.

We got our marks for the video today, and i topped the class. And miss showed the video to the class.

Hope you like it.

WATCH IT HD!
YouTube - Un-original Sin - Freeride/Berm Track [HD]

 

[SnItChY]

This is a private video cant watch

 

[headsmess]

see, the problem with education these days is that nothing deals with the actual subject its called anymore...i dont see how English has anything to do with making videos

P.S. you mis-spelt "assignment", and "something".

now, if it the subject had been art, id keep my trap shut

otherwise, your punctuation is quite good, and i only found one small grammatical error and its hard to say if it is an error or not...


ok, now im going to watch the video

 

[DvDRip]

otherwise, your punctuation is quite good, and i only found one small grammatical error and its hard to say if it is an error or not...

I miss skylar where'd she go?

 

[headsmess]

This is a private video cant watch

well, i wish youd posted this before i said im going to go watch this video


youtube, not some unknown damn site!!

privacy makes it sound coarse and vulgar, maybe even pornographic and sure to require my credit card details

oh, and on rereading the original post... you also misspelt "to" and "where" ...its "too" and "were"

and another grammatical error! its "my mate and I"

anymore?


*is possessed by the ghost of skylar*

im only being picky now cause of that damn site you used!!!!!

 

[SnItChY]

^^^^^^^^^^^ bahhhha aha hehe

 

[Andrew Aslan]

fark.... you guys are harsh.. lol just watch the bloody video!! hahah .
And i put the link to the youtube video.
And the video i handed in, i had fixed all the typos.

 

[headsmess]

happy except for the typos

(and the music! man, bicycle race, queen much more appropriate, lol)

wheres the track at?

and will you be getting royalties from red bull for the advertising?

 

[SnItChY]

good Andrew , i was impressed ,lil wobbly in parts but nice mate and nice music really suited the speed of the clip

 

[Andrew Aslan]

happy except for the typos

(and the music! man, bicycle race, queen much more appropriate, lol)

wheres the track at?

and will you be getting royalties from red bull for the advertising?

damn.. i wish i read that before i just sent an email to red bull asking for free stickers.. (sent email like 30secs ago).. hmm should of sent em the link to my vid.. hah

 

[Andrew Aslan]

I recorded the first 1:30 (intro) then my mate did the recording of the riding.

 

[TyD]

awesome video, enjoyed it a lot..

 

[Hanglider]

Nice Vid, the Anzac one u have up is good too, fun hill climbs and the track was looking a bit wet.

 

[Andrew Aslan]

The anzac one was when i had my pit bike. The blue bike is now my little cousins. I have a crf 230. And the editing and quality wasnt too great, i used Movie maker. Now i use Sony Vegas Pro 9. Soooo much better.